Academic Language Week 23 - Dog Fighting

Should dog fighting be illegal?
It should be because it wrong for them to take out there anger on an animal that really didn't do anything to them. And they should be put for a while so they can learned there lesson that they need to learned. And it not right for them to beat money of a animal that need to love and have a good home. Why would you want a animal to be mean so when so try to love it might snap at them like the owned didn't to the dog bye putting with a other dog. And it not right for them to be out there issue out on a animal that just want a home and someone show they loving that they didn't have when there owned how had didn't them very wrong. I will never go to a dog fight because I just might hurt the person who doing the dog wrong, because who would they like if someone didn't that to them they might not really like so they need to be in the shoes that they dogs are in .

Poetry Previous Knowledge Paragraph

I rather read story because it is really fast and they have more detail in it then a poem will have. And some story might be true and they will have the person attention then more a poem will have. Some times story will be true and some people might feel away better because they wont have to share in front people they might be scared and they might not open up. Because they put away more on the paper and they might more of there feelings on the paper.

Academic Language Week 21 - Steroids

I think they should be allowed to take if they can make sure that they not going to over do it. Because it might some people and it might make there heart pound a little going more it exposet to. And some people might not take the right amouned were not going to hurt them that much.