Tuesday, October 26, 2010

The Necklace" - Loisel

The Necklace" - Loisel

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The Necklace” – The Husband’s Point of View

I am so excited to give my wife those ticket so she can go to the ball. But she just had cry because she did have to the dresses for it and she try to talk to her husband to give the money he ask him how much money do you need. So he said a couple hundred dollars. He said OK I will give you the money if you go. So he did he gave her all the money that he save up he can go hunter with the guys. Then she was not still happy she did have a nickel. So she went to her find house she got one then she went to the ball. When she got there everybody was looking at her then she said finally I have people look at me. Then one the way home she had drop the nickel but she did know it. So when he got she said I had drop the nickel. Then her husband said we will back step to see were can find it the she said I must drop it the taxi. So then they said that they will buy her a know on she they went look and look then found one it cost a lot of money. Then they ask the owner the store to hold on it until three days went they can get the money. So they did went they got the money they said they will have to pay everybody back so they did ten hours of work to pay everybody back. Then one she was walking on the beach she was her friend she I might telly her she she walk up to he said hi how are you doing. Then she said that I had lost her nickle and we had to buy you knew one said it was just a fake.

Friday, October 22, 2010

When everything go all write then bad.

One day I was going to Disney land and I thought. Everything going to be all right but next I know it start to rain and all the ride were not that fun anything more. So they had close down one of my favorite ride because the seat were all wet and there were a long line so every body start to leave. Then when everybody start to leave the line got smaller. So people start to die down then everything went bad because my sister start to getting mad over everything. And so he boyfriend too so I just went to do my know thing know she want to leave but I don’t want to. So we start to get in a fight then next I know it I was just getting to point that know I really get mad I want to leave. Then on the way home we did talk at all and so when I got home I just and sleep then I leave I did want to hear her for the rest of the day.

Thursday, October 21, 2010

Cop of JCCS PLOT Diagram Skeleton

Paper Airplane From Different Pionts Of View

Paper Airplane From Different Points Of View

One day I was about to start my work and next I know something had pass my face and I turned around and some one was off task and he was just trying to get some one to pay attention to him. So I just laugh at him and so I said what so stupid. Because he has to get some one attention to make him feeling like e is so cool.

Around 11:00 clock one teacher try to start he lesson and the student had take her attention off the student so she can take and take all her attention off the student and so when she was done deal with her she had to start all of by the time when she was done school was all over and then she did get to telly us what we had to do she the next day every body was mad because the one student had to attack up so he cold get attention from some kids that are stupid to give him so attention. Then the next day kid finally attack right when he was went in the classroom because said if you not going to attack right don’t go in the classroom because there student he in her that want to learn.

So then one of the kids was think why would those kid to get attention she he can just get out the class work there different ways to do that get out the class work he dose not have to get people attention by be stupid and dum. So he get so get in so much trouble and he think that every body just forgive him. But no because they were try to learn and had to some stupid to get out of the work.

Monday, October 18, 2010

Chilean Miners Rescue

 I think that people that were under ground were pretty luck when they had that person to go get them. There luck when they had first ade down there to help the people that had bad hurt and need candy to make there blood to go up and no down. Good thing that they had a lot of peopl down there if they did people would been cold and there body heat would been good if some one did have the right clothes on. I beat that they did have th coimg to them if they know that if they were going to get suck down there they would have went down there in the first place.

Chilean Miners Reach Surface in Extraordinary Rescue

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Thursday, October 7, 2010

Autobiographical Narrative Editing Form

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Elena Narrtive

Well it start out like this. I was living with my mom had during the summer she got very sick. Then a couple week after that she had past away. Then I have move with my sister Amy. That was best thing very even thought I miss my mom I still Had my family.Then I had got taken to Polinsky that was hard thing very because just walk in a big place every and expose to know everybody.The hard part was not see my family like to got to see very single day. I just want people to know it like being a foster child.

Ounce a pad a time I was sitting a sister dad house and then Some police officer walk thought I ask why is there a cop in a door. My sister said there take me I that what they think. Then I try to ran out the door and she try to stop me. But I did have the right clothes on tho ran from the cop. I had on some sweat pant shirt and some worry shoes on. Then when I was try my pants had rip dam what Elset would go worry today. So she had to cruft on me she did want to ran or hurt my self. Before I had left I ask why dose it have to be like this. Amy said It the best for me but I said no I want to be with my family that the best for me right know.

Around Morning time before the cop had came my sister Amy just got out the shower and she was wearing swat pants and shirt. Then she was very sad and she said when you get there call me. I would thing that you would follow my foot step. Then I said I wish these would even had happened.Please I don't want to go I will be good.

At first I was mad because I did want to get take away from my family. That was the hard thing very because I am all ways with my sister and go every were with them know I have to wait to I am 18. But after ward I found my self going to school because I never went to school. Know I am here they can help me with I need to stay in school and go to collage like I had a bream but it never work out like these. But I can ways talk to my family on the phone or write to them.

Monday, October 4, 2010

Memorable Days

1. When I was five went to Disneyland with my faimly. I went on all the rides.
2. When I was nine my sister had a boyfriend then I did like him. He was all right after a few days. Shortly after that, my dad got locked up in jail.
3. I was 10, when we went fishing for my sister's birthday. Then we went to the movies. That was fun.
4. When I was 11, we had move to different house and got a dog.
5. When I was 12, I had got in a fight with my sister and my brother.
6. When I was 13, I went snowboarding. That was fun because all my faimly was there.
7. When I was 14, I ran away from home. I went to my sister's house.
8. When I was 14, I got a snake and a bird. My mom did like snake. My dad got out of jail. He is now trying to see me.
9. During the summer, my mom was very sick for the entire summer.
10. When I turned 15 my mom died. It happend all fast and I thought it was going to happend. Then I got put in the foster system. It was hard not seeing my faimly every day. I was doing for my whole life.