Wednesday, December 15, 2010

"What I learned in the 9/10 Quarter"

These Quarter I have learned the definitions of the word iroy and ambiguity. Then we had learned how to used template to put use in Oder to how we need to the important part of the story together and the we used graft Organizer. Then we all sit down and read a story after we had to see how the feel and what was the most important part of the story what you have learned. Then we had learned how to make a blog then all are work go on the blog the blog is Polish to the web so everybody can see how we are only freshman and we know how to all ready Polish stuff on the web and the best part everybody can get fee back to people when they need it. Then we have learned how make a Delicious then we had used that when we had to find definition of the word that we had learned today. Then we had to a account to the wed site of foxpop we used to that have to record or voice that we had to do today.

Monday, December 13, 2010

"The Lady or the Tiger” Which Door

Because so the king can see her if he like her. A door beneath the royal party opened and the lover of the princess waled into the arena. She feel loving with her long fair hair and a tall beautail her appearance was greeted with low hum not know so grand a youth had lived amoung them.  She wanted to be with the king for every and she did want to eat by the animal.

"My most generous gift"

The most generous gift I have ever given was to my sister. I gave her $100. I gave her this gift so she could get her daughter clothes and toys to play with. My sister had told me not to get her a gift, but I still did because she is my sister and I love her. My sister was very surprised when I handed her this gift.

Friday, December 10, 2010

The Gift of the Magi” - Surprise Ending.

When I finished reading “The Gift of the Magi” by O. Henry, I felt like Della really had feelings for her husband. She tried to make him feel like he was the only important person in her life. She cut her hair to give him a Christmas present for his watch. And she looked around town to see if they had a gold chain for him. Then when she got one she tried to make it a present for him. She had to tell him that she cut her hair to get him his chain for his watch. Then when she opened her present, it was combs but she did have not hair. So they both put up their present and decided to used them when they’re ready.
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Monday, December 6, 2010

Persuasive Project Publication



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Monday, November 29, 2010

Students should/should not be allowed to play sports if they have low grades.

Students should/should not be allowed to play sports if they have low grades. Are not allowed to play sports because they need do stand on there work and no by are going to to make the team or do have enough time to do there homework. They should also way think about school before any thing and there grade too because if they don’t have the grade to play then. They don’t pay attention in school because there mad that they can not played a sports. In stalled they should no be worry about to practive they should worry about there going to school Mady study for school. Because later in life if they don’t pass they would not make it to collage and some of theses boy would have to go to collage to be what they want to be like NFL football player. How they became that is going to school and going to collage.

Monday, November 22, 2010

Copy of Theme Graphic Organizer

The Sniper" and "Cranes" Theme Comparison Essays First Draft

“The Sniper and Cranes Theme Comparison Essay First Draft”

The both are about the war and how other one had a conflict to each one. The sniper had to conflict about how the guy that was try to the enemy in stalled he shoot the his family remember but he did know install he had look at the face that was face down to the ground.

So then he got his arm shoot off by the guy that was try to kill him because he try to save his community for the other people to stay live.

The cranes story is about the same thing because the boy was with his then next you know it family had got shoot and his friend but these guy was his old friend. But these was set up to it and he did know that it was his friend.

So the boy walk up to him and look at him he was all tie up it was one of his old friend that he play with all long time go. So he had a smoke light but he said I should put these out because he dose not get any. So he over some people talk about that their are some people after who are tie up the cranes. story are Then he had let go the bird but it was his friend in stalled he let go his friend and not the bird. So both of the story about how both are in the war. I think about both us these story are both like but there are different because they telly about what they are doing and what doing to save there people or there family.

Friday, November 19, 2010

"The Sniper" and "Cranes" Theme Comparison Essays First Draft

The both are about the war and how other one had a conflict to each one. The sniper had to conflict about how the guy that was try to the enemy in stalled he shoot the his family remember but he did know install he had look at the face that was face down to the ground. So then he got his arm shoot off by the guy that was try to kill him because he try to save his community for the other people to stay live. The cranes story is about the same thing because the boy was with his then next you know it family had got shoot and his friend but these guy was his old friend. But these was set up to it and he did know that it was his friend. So the boy walk up to him and look at him he was all tie up it was one of his old friend that he play with all long time go. So he had a smoke light but he said I should put these out because he dose not get any. So he over some people talk about that their are some people after who are tie up the cranes. story are Then he had let go the bird but it was his friend in stalled he let go his friend and not the bird. So both of the story about how both are in the war.

Monday, November 15, 2010

SPA Movie and Game Day Reflection


When I arrived at school on Friday I was ready for my first period class. I was walking to the cafeteria. I saw Derek and he told me that it wasn’t a regular school day, and that everyone had to watch a movie and play games. We watched a movie. The movie was called “Freedom Writers.” It was about teenagers who were gang bangers. The teacher was trying to teach them that life isn’t always about fighting and gangs--life can be so much better without having people killed for walking on the wrong side of the street. When it was time to play the games, it was pretty packed in the gym. Everybody was cheering for their class. Juniors won all games. Then Mr. Walker dismissed everybody. It was then time to eat. There were hot dogs and hamburgers. I really enjoyed that day because we didn’t have to do classwork.

SPA Movie & Games Day Paragraph

Homeroom Reform Essay

P'Jay, Andrew, and I wrote this for the KNSD Homeroom Reform Essay Contest.

I think SPA is a good school because there’s a series of sports that gives us chances in life such as Andrew Pascualgoing to college, playing basketball or any sport while you get there. I know most foster kids don’t make it in life but I know there’s a possible way to succeed in life. I love basketball, maybe when I get a chance I’ll be in the NCAA. There are positive goals, then there are negative goals. It all depends on how you achieve this goal. Making pointless goals will get you “nowhere.” That’s probably one out of many reasons kids drop out of high school.Now when you fall from where you became successful, you process positive changes that shapes your future.SPA is a chance of being a successful student that is if you do what is need to be done and then strive and get to the greatest advantage, and that advantage is getting a scholarship and proceeding through out your future. Accomplish a dream that you really want throughout your life whether it’ll be a professional basketball player, or doing something you enjoy.

We are writing an essay to let people know about SPA and what we need here and how life here at SPA is. San Pasqual Academy is a home for foster youth and the kids came here for schooling and a home. They have either come from a bad environment r this is just a temporary placement till the court knows what to do. Either way they still live here and need a family. This facility gives us foster youth a chance to get into college. According to statistics foster youth are less likely to make it into college or get a home and keep a job. There are various sports teams her at SPA but we would like another basketball gym, specifically an outside one. Although this is a foster youth facility we do follow the rules as though we are a normal high school. Our GPA’s have to be at a certain level to play our sports. We also have curfew here depending on your grades you can either come in earlier or stay out later but no later than 10:00 on the weekends and 9:00 during the school week. This awesome facility has been opened since 2001, and we really love it here. We would love it more if we had an outside basketball court.

Why does SPA need funding? Spa needs this funding to help us and stay in shape. That statement goes right back to us needing an outside basketball court. This could really help us stay away from the drama and drugs. We would have two gyms to keep the kids that like inside gyms and volleyball inside. Think about it on a day where everyone wants to go to the gym and it gets way too hot, this happens all the time then we have students passing out on the floor. We could even use the money to build another gym period for the kids that like other sports we could start a new sport here. I like gymnastics and so does a few other kids but we do not have that here or cheer leading, but we really want it. This prize could really be our chance to make our home a better place for us.

We as students need an outdoor basketball gym to develop our stamina so when sports come we can participate in sport activities such as basketball, soccer, football, track, and baseball. These sports would keep us active and healthy. Plus when we join a team, it’ll be no problem running back and fourth. Conditioning takes a major part in sport activities, making sure you breathe properly and focusing on movements during games. Having a prize would be good for our school, having kids get involved in sports they like instead of football, and basketball. Well how are we going to participate in sport activities if we get lower GPA lower than a 2.0

Our contributions to these hopes that all ready been made is joining contests just like this one. We are writing these to show how we need things the other kids have. It would be helpful if we had a other basketball court for us. Taking our hope publicity to ask Jammer to get us a other basketball court. So people will stay study and pay attention. In class and the wont have much kick out.

Monday, November 8, 2010

Title your post, “SPA Theme Song.” Tie My hands"

The song Tie My hand go alone with SPA because when thire stuff going on some people think thire in war with everybody. If some people just dont get alone with people here some they try everything smach what was going on so they make it the bigger promble it is. So when it end up done somebody is all ready going to hurt them self. So them when it came around the staff there dose help in a way. They do help us with our schooling or help us to help us with living skull.

“SPA Theme Song.” Tie My Hands"

(Robin Thicke)
We are at war
With the universe falling whThis is
The sky is like when people are at war
and the only thing that can save us now And soen ther try to find out
is sensitivity and compassion what going on so then their mad at
But I know one thing's for sure the world.So that why it when thire need help they go and find what they need to stay happy at were their
I'm gonna get my kicks before it all burns down stay.

(Lil Wayne)
yeah, Some say tragedy is hard to get over
But some time that tragedy means its over, soulja
from the academy, league of rollers
I deny being down though they seem to hold us
my shoulders are strong, i prove them wrong
I ain't doing nothin but movin on, let the truth be known
But they talk that freedom matters, and didn't even leave a ladder, damn
(Robin Thicke)
I work at the corner store
We all got problems problems
Who was gon fight alone
No one's gon save us now
How you feel, you're not alone
We're all just jealous jealous
We don't reach the sky no more
We just can't overcome no

Chorus (Robin Thicke)
You tie my hands
What am I gonna be
What have I done so bad
What is my destiny
You tie my hands
What am I supposed to see
What have I done so bad
What am I gonna be

(Lil Wayne)
I, knock on the door, hope isn't home,
fates not around, the lucks all gone
don't ask me whats wrong, ask me whats right
and ima tell you whats life
and did you know?
I lost everything, but I ain't the only one
first came the hurricane, then the morning sun
Excuse me if I'm on one, and don't trip if i light one, i walk a tight one
They try to tell me keep my eyes open
my whole city under water, some people still floatin
and they wonder why black people still voting, cause your presidents still chokin
Take away the football team, the basketball team
now all we got is me to represent New Orleans, shit

[ From: http://www.metrolyrics.com/tie-my-hands-lyrics-robin-thicke.html ]

no governor, no help from the mayor
just a steady beatin heart, and a wish and a prayer
lets pray

(Robin Thicke)
These friends they come and go
but I got family family
These kids so fast they grow
They learn so quickly now
But there's no where to go,
but there's future future
Don't make this seem so low
And we can't overcome

Chorus

(Lil Wayne)
and if you come from under that water then theres fresh air
just breathe baby, gods got a blessing to spare
yes, i know the process has so much stress
but its the progress that feels the best
cause i came from the projects straight to success
and your next, so try they cant steal your pride its inside
then find it and keep on grinding
cause in every dark cloud theres a silver lining
I know...

yeah, yeah... yeah
see... Right now we just riding on love
And shine in the dark, we aint tryna do nothing be at the heart
We need love, that's all now

Chorus:
You tie my hands, what am i gonna be
What have i done so bad, what is my destiny
You tie my hands, what am I going to see
What have I done so bad, what am I gonna be

Born right here in the USA
But due to tragedy, looked on by the whole world as a refugee
So, accept my emotion, do not take it as an offensive gesture
It's just the epitome of my soul
And I must be me
We got spirit y'all
We go spirit
We got soul y'all
We got soul
They don't want us to see, But we already know

The song "Tie My Hands" go alone with SPA because when thire stuff going on some people think thire in war with everybody. If some people just dont get alone with people here some they try everything smach what was going on so they make it the bigger promble it is. So when it end up done somebody is all ready going to hurt them self. So them when it came around the staff there dose help in a way. They do help us with our schooling or help us to help us with living skill.

Friday, November 5, 2010

“The Sniper” Before or After Narrative

Well at the end the sniper had die because he could have made it because his arm was shoot had it had a open cut. So when he was in the war he had shoot somebody else but he did know intall in look at his face. But it was his bother so know he feel abd then he wish that he did want shoot at his bother.

"The Sniper" Theme Graphic Organizer

Thursday, November 4, 2010

Internal and External Conflicts in the Story

In the story "The Sniper,” the sniper faces both external and internal conflicts. The internal confilict kill the other guy and he make the guy think that he is die and then he get away from the roof. At the end of the story he had thought that he had short the other guy he did it was his bother. But he did know because his bother was going for the other team.

Wednesday, November 3, 2010

"The Sniper" Fear

When facing heart-pounding fear, people perform well, because are they brave enough to put themselves in that position to help others. For example, during the terrorist attacks of 9-11, the people who were in the jet which got hijacked had to be brave enough to stand up for themselves. They also had to fight to save their lives. They also had to stay calm. All of these people, weren't expecting to go through the situation they went through, but they had to do whatever they could to save their lives.

Monday, November 1, 2010

Halloween Memory

Around 7:00 Clock Elena had to deal with a hole bench of drama. So then it was just all scary because are doing those for one dumb thing that I every hear. They are pretty stupid to do that. My Halloween was going good install so body had just jump somebody. Before that even happened I was watch the cool movie every. I was have the best time every then I had walk out side to go home and I hear somebody cry. Then He had call my name over there I went over there and he said go keep my bother so I did then everything went down every body had to go in side because were on lock down that was the board thing every. So my house meat we were having the best if we were some were else then in the house. Then my staff and made us cookie then we were watching movie then it came round it was the time to go hit the hay. Then I said even throw we did go did we did get to treat or tick we had fun at our house.

Tuesday, October 26, 2010

The Necklace" - Loisel

The Necklace" - Loisel

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The Necklace” – The Husband’s Point of View

I am so excited to give my wife those ticket so she can go to the ball. But she just had cry because she did have to the dresses for it and she try to talk to her husband to give the money he ask him how much money do you need. So he said a couple hundred dollars. He said OK I will give you the money if you go. So he did he gave her all the money that he save up he can go hunter with the guys. Then she was not still happy she did have a nickel. So she went to her find house she got one then she went to the ball. When she got there everybody was looking at her then she said finally I have people look at me. Then one the way home she had drop the nickel but she did know it. So when he got she said I had drop the nickel. Then her husband said we will back step to see were can find it the she said I must drop it the taxi. So then they said that they will buy her a know on she they went look and look then found one it cost a lot of money. Then they ask the owner the store to hold on it until three days went they can get the money. So they did went they got the money they said they will have to pay everybody back so they did ten hours of work to pay everybody back. Then one she was walking on the beach she was her friend she I might telly her she she walk up to he said hi how are you doing. Then she said that I had lost her nickle and we had to buy you knew one said it was just a fake.

Friday, October 22, 2010

When everything go all write then bad.

One day I was going to Disney land and I thought. Everything going to be all right but next I know it start to rain and all the ride were not that fun anything more. So they had close down one of my favorite ride because the seat were all wet and there were a long line so every body start to leave. Then when everybody start to leave the line got smaller. So people start to die down then everything went bad because my sister start to getting mad over everything. And so he boyfriend too so I just went to do my know thing know she want to leave but I don’t want to. So we start to get in a fight then next I know it I was just getting to point that know I really get mad I want to leave. Then on the way home we did talk at all and so when I got home I just and sleep then I leave I did want to hear her for the rest of the day.

Thursday, October 21, 2010

Cop of JCCS PLOT Diagram Skeleton

Paper Airplane From Different Pionts Of View

Paper Airplane From Different Points Of View

One day I was about to start my work and next I know something had pass my face and I turned around and some one was off task and he was just trying to get some one to pay attention to him. So I just laugh at him and so I said what so stupid. Because he has to get some one attention to make him feeling like e is so cool.

Around 11:00 clock one teacher try to start he lesson and the student had take her attention off the student so she can take and take all her attention off the student and so when she was done deal with her she had to start all of by the time when she was done school was all over and then she did get to telly us what we had to do she the next day every body was mad because the one student had to attack up so he cold get attention from some kids that are stupid to give him so attention. Then the next day kid finally attack right when he was went in the classroom because said if you not going to attack right don’t go in the classroom because there student he in her that want to learn.

So then one of the kids was think why would those kid to get attention she he can just get out the class work there different ways to do that get out the class work he dose not have to get people attention by be stupid and dum. So he get so get in so much trouble and he think that every body just forgive him. But no because they were try to learn and had to some stupid to get out of the work.

Monday, October 18, 2010

Chilean Miners Rescue

 I think that people that were under ground were pretty luck when they had that person to go get them. There luck when they had first ade down there to help the people that had bad hurt and need candy to make there blood to go up and no down. Good thing that they had a lot of peopl down there if they did people would been cold and there body heat would been good if some one did have the right clothes on. I beat that they did have th coimg to them if they know that if they were going to get suck down there they would have went down there in the first place.

Chilean Miners Reach Surface in Extraordinary Rescue

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Thursday, October 7, 2010

Autobiographical Narrative Editing Form

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Elena Narrtive

Well it start out like this. I was living with my mom had during the summer she got very sick. Then a couple week after that she had past away. Then I have move with my sister Amy. That was best thing very even thought I miss my mom I still Had my family.Then I had got taken to Polinsky that was hard thing very because just walk in a big place every and expose to know everybody.The hard part was not see my family like to got to see very single day. I just want people to know it like being a foster child.

Ounce a pad a time I was sitting a sister dad house and then Some police officer walk thought I ask why is there a cop in a door. My sister said there take me I that what they think. Then I try to ran out the door and she try to stop me. But I did have the right clothes on tho ran from the cop. I had on some sweat pant shirt and some worry shoes on. Then when I was try my pants had rip dam what Elset would go worry today. So she had to cruft on me she did want to ran or hurt my self. Before I had left I ask why dose it have to be like this. Amy said It the best for me but I said no I want to be with my family that the best for me right know.

Around Morning time before the cop had came my sister Amy just got out the shower and she was wearing swat pants and shirt. Then she was very sad and she said when you get there call me. I would thing that you would follow my foot step. Then I said I wish these would even had happened.Please I don't want to go I will be good.

At first I was mad because I did want to get take away from my family. That was the hard thing very because I am all ways with my sister and go every were with them know I have to wait to I am 18. But after ward I found my self going to school because I never went to school. Know I am here they can help me with I need to stay in school and go to collage like I had a bream but it never work out like these. But I can ways talk to my family on the phone or write to them.

Monday, October 4, 2010

Memorable Days

1. When I was five went to Disneyland with my faimly. I went on all the rides.
2. When I was nine my sister had a boyfriend then I did like him. He was all right after a few days. Shortly after that, my dad got locked up in jail.
3. I was 10, when we went fishing for my sister's birthday. Then we went to the movies. That was fun.
4. When I was 11, we had move to different house and got a dog.
5. When I was 12, I had got in a fight with my sister and my brother.
6. When I was 13, I went snowboarding. That was fun because all my faimly was there.
7. When I was 14, I ran away from home. I went to my sister's house.
8. When I was 14, I got a snake and a bird. My mom did like snake. My dad got out of jail. He is now trying to see me.
9. During the summer, my mom was very sick for the entire summer.
10. When I turned 15 my mom died. It happend all fast and I thought it was going to happend. Then I got put in the foster system. It was hard not seeing my faimly every day. I was doing for my whole life.

Monday, September 27, 2010

Marigolds" Moving Into Adult Life Paragraph

People are going deal with it.Because one day in there life they are going to have to take responsibly to take the next step in being an adult. If they don’t learned know there going have to on there plant and here just going depend on some body else. So there going have learned some how if they don’t there not going to make in life. That people are going to have to take responsibly in there action or there mistake that they make in life. If they make the worry one in life it might hurt them or put them in the worry position or endupthe up into jail.

Tuesday, September 21, 2010

Roger

Respectful
Observant
Grateful
Easygoing
Responsible

OAATS Analyis of Campus Adult

I just want to say my best person is Diane and she is the best person she help me with problem. When I came home from school and I need help with my my home she will help with When she dose she will try her her best. So when I have need to go on a walk she will take. I am happy that she take because she will understanding what we go thought every day will people that we live on campus.Because she know what we go thought she had hear had people are suck don't stay out people drama. So I am happy that she is hear to help us because she did help I would ready had leave. I would ready had lose what I had and what they would help me with some stuff.

Monday, September 20, 2010

Thank you Mrs. Jones

Dear Mrs.Jones, 9/20/10
I just want to say thank you for every thing that you have done to help me when I was up to no good. I just want to say that if you did help I would no get want I want and I would have done that to worry person and got myself in more trouble. Starting to day that day back in 1980 I was not going the well I am done to in 2010. Today I am going to school and just about to fished. About to get my collage degree in cooking. If you did not teach me in matter I would not get the respect I get from people know. I just want to say thank you every much for helping in matter away.

Siceanly
Rogger

Character Chart

Wednesday, September 15, 2010

''Thank You M'am''

One day I was walk down the street and a young teen just walk up grab my pocketbook. Boy dont you have anthing thing else to do then grab my pocketbook. Then get up boy you better grab it for me. Anit you got anthing matter to just go behined a woman that that take something. Sorry I just want some blue shose if you want jess ask for then. Dont you got parent at home to teach you better then to do that. Well then get up look at your face I going to take you home wash that face. Then I am going to take home and give you some food because I know that your hurry. Then there at the house he look at the door and look at her and look again.Then he went in the back and wash his face. Then he was look for the towle but there was no towle so he just is used his sheet. Then she said he the money to go get your shoes and have a goood night You better be a good boy at there.

"When the Going Gets Tough"

One day I was going to start to play on the football team. People said you might want to go though because it going to take all your effort to put into the team. So they said you have to go though all the practices and commit to the team.I know that I was tough enough so when it starts will get going.Because people are going to going to the game have a part of the team. If you not going to give all your effort the then you should not even show up to pracitces. Then it take a lot of thought to play football because you going have to keep up your grade.

Tuesday, September 14, 2010

9/11

I think that 9/11 was just Mady some people that did want to go throw people being rude to them. So mad they had to crush plane that least had more then a lot of people on plane. So they kill people that did know what was going on. For the people were on the plane should not went thought that because it was not there was not there fault what had went down. So they should not had been in that place at the wrong time. That too bad for there family and friends and wife and etc they should not been thought that situation.

Wednesday, September 8, 2010

Bird in Orange Groves

One day I was walking down the Orange tree. There was a bird moving in the tree I loke up and say a blue jay. Then I away it came with me everywere I went. So then I went home it flowend me to my house. So then I went to school the next day. When I came home she was no there I ask my staff were my pet.She telly me that it got kill my friend cat eat it. I was so mad that I would get one more then the next day I did. I made sure that the cat did not get to it. Then fainlly said that it should have free bream. It should be lock up in the house so then I let it go.

Friday, September 3, 2010

My Flashback

I remembered when we had a picnic at the beach. We were walking on the sand and just talking about life. The sand was not too hot or too warm. The temperature was good. The water was not too hot or too cold. We had just walked around the stores and shopped. We also rode the roller coaster. I felt happy as we picked up sand dollars. Then, we walked to the dog beach to meet my sister and my dog. Later, we all went out to lunch at a Mexican restaurant. After that, we went home. I realized that fighting didn’t solve our problems. Instead, it just made things worse. I wished that we got along more when she was alive.
(Typed by the amazing Ms. Priester, because she accidentally deleted my document while helping me.)

Wednesday, September 1, 2010

Special Relationship with an Animal

I have a relationship with my pet dragon. It was the best pet I every had. Because one time i was going to the store and she was just sleeping on my shoulder. Then the people that work said that you can't have pet in the store sorry you have to go home. SO then home got in bed so he can go in there up . It was best time I every had to with my pet so then one day I was sleeping she was on me then I wake up and she was no there I look every were could find then went to mom and she I found here I pick here up and hold install you wake up. Then one day I came home I went to hold her she was on in her bed. Ask were my pet they said that she had die I was so sad because she was my best pet I would every had. Then one day I was on my way home some one had bye me new I said what in that in the box. They said open so I did it was one I was so happy and said I never going to let this one out my eye.

Villian vs.General Zaroff

I think that the General Zaroff had a idea what he was doing. Because he had everything planed.If Villian had a idea what he was doing. One day the villian was just talking and the Zaroff was in the tree and so he mad a planed to hit zaroff in the face with the tree branch. That talk about how people just go out of now were to just doing the thing that they do. It talk about that why to people should not work togeather if you dont get along. What would happend if the on of them shoot some one would they have to dill with it. Because have to go on they just shoot a person that dont even know. So that why people shoot anything body.

Wednesday, August 25, 2010

Zaroff

I think General Zaroff mad the right move to not go hunting with Raindford. Because had black mail through the hole game. The we he said that you can go with me in the middle of the night. He was try to tealy him that h"Contents of the Dead Man's Pocket" Plot Change Paragraphe was good for him. Then we thy first start he only gave him gun that kill one animal. So the next day Zaroff had when through a gate area so then raindoford was behind him wile he went through the gate. So while he was on the drive way Randford had pull out a smoke so then he light it up. Then he blow a circle in he air. So zaroff had hold his breath so he would smell the smoke. then he had see him see hi trued around act like h was no therebut he was here.

Tuesday, August 24, 2010

Hunting

I would not go hunting. Because it will hurt the animals. They do have a life just like humans. It should be illegal for people to do that. There a season when there's no hunting. It's useful. If people have to that, they have no life. What if there was somebody walking along and they just shot you for nothing. People would be wasting time too, because they're hungry. It's not like they don't have food at home. They just want to kill an animal. What would happen if they were an animal? Hunting is cruel to animals.

Monday, August 23, 2010

Fascinating Villian

One day here was a boy walk on his away home. He walk no were. So he said came here but the dog was so scared that he stay. Then he keep walk then the dog was following him.Then he sat down the dog came up start jump on him. Then walk up to the house his mom said who dog.He said I don't know he follow me home. You going have to up sing how dog. Then the next day a men man walk up to the house and he said you have my dog. Martin said do you have proof it your dog. Then he said i will let work for me too have the bog. Then the next 30days martin work for him and. Then when it was time he did want to the dog to him.