Tuesday, November 30, 2010
Persuasive Project Topic Request
After reviewing the Voxopop discussion, I would like to persuade people to cafe, excersice, or County Social Worker . You may listen to my class’s discussion here.
Monday, November 29, 2010
Students should/should not be allowed to play sports if they have low grades.
Students should/should not be allowed to play sports if they have low grades. Are not allowed to play sports because they need do stand on there work and no by are going to to make the team or do have enough time to do there homework. They should also way think about school before any thing and there grade too because if they don’t have the grade to play then. They don’t pay attention in school because there mad that they can not played a sports. In stalled they should no be worry about to practive they should worry about there going to school Mady study for school. Because later in life if they don’t pass they would not make it to collage and some of theses boy would have to go to collage to be what they want to be like NFL football player. How they became that is going to school and going to collage.
Tuesday, November 23, 2010
Monday, November 22, 2010
The Sniper" and "Cranes" Theme Comparison Essays First Draft
“The Sniper and Cranes Theme Comparison Essay First Draft”
The both are about the war and how other one had a conflict to each one. The sniper had to conflict about how the guy that was try to the enemy in stalled he shoot the his family remember but he did know install he had look at the face that was face down to the ground.
So then he got his arm shoot off by the guy that was try to kill him because he try to save his community for the other people to stay live.
The cranes story is about the same thing because the boy was with his then next you know it family had got shoot and his friend but these guy was his old friend. But these was set up to it and he did know that it was his friend.
So the boy walk up to him and look at him he was all tie up it was one of his old friend that he play with all long time go. So he had a smoke light but he said I should put these out because he dose not get any. So he over some people talk about that their are some people after who are tie up the cranes. story are Then he had let go the bird but it was his friend in stalled he let go his friend and not the bird. So both of the story about how both are in the war. I think about both us these story are both like but there are different because they telly about what they are doing and what doing to save there people or there family.
The both are about the war and how other one had a conflict to each one. The sniper had to conflict about how the guy that was try to the enemy in stalled he shoot the his family remember but he did know install he had look at the face that was face down to the ground.
So then he got his arm shoot off by the guy that was try to kill him because he try to save his community for the other people to stay live.
The cranes story is about the same thing because the boy was with his then next you know it family had got shoot and his friend but these guy was his old friend. But these was set up to it and he did know that it was his friend.
So the boy walk up to him and look at him he was all tie up it was one of his old friend that he play with all long time go. So he had a smoke light but he said I should put these out because he dose not get any. So he over some people talk about that their are some people after who are tie up the cranes. story are Then he had let go the bird but it was his friend in stalled he let go his friend and not the bird. So both of the story about how both are in the war. I think about both us these story are both like but there are different because they telly about what they are doing and what doing to save there people or there family.
Friday, November 19, 2010
"The Sniper" and "Cranes" Theme Comparison Essays First Draft
The both are about the war and how other one had a conflict to each one. The sniper had to conflict about how the guy that was try to the enemy in stalled he shoot the his family remember but he did know install he had look at the face that was face down to the ground. So then he got his arm shoot off by the guy that was try to kill him because he try to save his community for the other people to stay live. The cranes story is about the same thing because the boy was with his then next you know it family had got shoot and his friend but these guy was his old friend. But these was set up to it and he did know that it was his friend. So the boy walk up to him and look at him he was all tie up it was one of his old friend that he play with all long time go. So he had a smoke light but he said I should put these out because he dose not get any. So he over some people talk about that their are some people after who are tie up the cranes. story are Then he had let go the bird but it was his friend in stalled he let go his friend and not the bird. So both of the story about how both are in the war.
Monday, November 15, 2010
SPA Movie and Game Day Reflection
When I arrived at school on Friday I was ready for my first period class. I was walking to the cafeteria. I saw Derek and he told me that it wasn’t a regular school day, and that everyone had to watch a movie and play games. We watched a movie. The movie was called “Freedom Writers.” It was about teenagers who were gang bangers. The teacher was trying to teach them that life isn’t always about fighting and gangs--life can be so much better without having people killed for walking on the wrong side of the street. When it was time to play the games, it was pretty packed in the gym. Everybody was cheering for their class. Juniors won all games. Then Mr. Walker dismissed everybody. It was then time to eat. There were hot dogs and hamburgers. I really enjoyed that day because we didn’t have to do classwork.
Homeroom Reform Essay
P'Jay, Andrew, and I wrote this for the KNSD Homeroom Reform Essay Contest.
I think SPA is a good school because there’s a series of sports that gives us chances in life such as Andrew Pascualgoing to college, playing basketball or any sport while you get there. I know most foster kids don’t make it in life but I know there’s a possible way to succeed in life. I love basketball, maybe when I get a chance I’ll be in the NCAA. There are positive goals, then there are negative goals. It all depends on how you achieve this goal. Making pointless goals will get you “nowhere.” That’s probably one out of many reasons kids drop out of high school.Now when you fall from where you became successful, you process positive changes that shapes your future.SPA is a chance of being a successful student that is if you do what is need to be done and then strive and get to the greatest advantage, and that advantage is getting a scholarship and proceeding through out your future. Accomplish a dream that you really want throughout your life whether it’ll be a professional basketball player, or doing something you enjoy.
We are writing an essay to let people know about SPA and what we need here and how life here at SPA is. San Pasqual Academy is a home for foster youth and the kids came here for schooling and a home. They have either come from a bad environment r this is just a temporary placement till the court knows what to do. Either way they still live here and need a family. This facility gives us foster youth a chance to get into college. According to statistics foster youth are less likely to make it into college or get a home and keep a job. There are various sports teams her at SPA but we would like another basketball gym, specifically an outside one. Although this is a foster youth facility we do follow the rules as though we are a normal high school. Our GPA’s have to be at a certain level to play our sports. We also have curfew here depending on your grades you can either come in earlier or stay out later but no later than 10:00 on the weekends and 9:00 during the school week. This awesome facility has been opened since 2001, and we really love it here. We would love it more if we had an outside basketball court.
Why does SPA need funding? Spa needs this funding to help us and stay in shape. That statement goes right back to us needing an outside basketball court. This could really help us stay away from the drama and drugs. We would have two gyms to keep the kids that like inside gyms and volleyball inside. Think about it on a day where everyone wants to go to the gym and it gets way too hot, this happens all the time then we have students passing out on the floor. We could even use the money to build another gym period for the kids that like other sports we could start a new sport here. I like gymnastics and so does a few other kids but we do not have that here or cheer leading, but we really want it. This prize could really be our chance to make our home a better place for us.
We as students need an outdoor basketball gym to develop our stamina so when sports come we can participate in sport activities such as basketball, soccer, football, track, and baseball. These sports would keep us active and healthy. Plus when we join a team, it’ll be no problem running back and fourth. Conditioning takes a major part in sport activities, making sure you breathe properly and focusing on movements during games. Having a prize would be good for our school, having kids get involved in sports they like instead of football, and basketball. Well how are we going to participate in sport activities if we get lower GPA lower than a 2.0
Our contributions to these hopes that all ready been made is joining contests just like this one. We are writing these to show how we need things the other kids have. It would be helpful if we had a other basketball court for us. Taking our hope publicity to ask Jammer to get us a other basketball court. So people will stay study and pay attention. In class and the wont have much kick out.
I think SPA is a good school because there’s a series of sports that gives us chances in life such as Andrew Pascualgoing to college, playing basketball or any sport while you get there. I know most foster kids don’t make it in life but I know there’s a possible way to succeed in life. I love basketball, maybe when I get a chance I’ll be in the NCAA. There are positive goals, then there are negative goals. It all depends on how you achieve this goal. Making pointless goals will get you “nowhere.” That’s probably one out of many reasons kids drop out of high school.Now when you fall from where you became successful, you process positive changes that shapes your future.SPA is a chance of being a successful student that is if you do what is need to be done and then strive and get to the greatest advantage, and that advantage is getting a scholarship and proceeding through out your future. Accomplish a dream that you really want throughout your life whether it’ll be a professional basketball player, or doing something you enjoy.
We are writing an essay to let people know about SPA and what we need here and how life here at SPA is. San Pasqual Academy is a home for foster youth and the kids came here for schooling and a home. They have either come from a bad environment r this is just a temporary placement till the court knows what to do. Either way they still live here and need a family. This facility gives us foster youth a chance to get into college. According to statistics foster youth are less likely to make it into college or get a home and keep a job. There are various sports teams her at SPA but we would like another basketball gym, specifically an outside one. Although this is a foster youth facility we do follow the rules as though we are a normal high school. Our GPA’s have to be at a certain level to play our sports. We also have curfew here depending on your grades you can either come in earlier or stay out later but no later than 10:00 on the weekends and 9:00 during the school week. This awesome facility has been opened since 2001, and we really love it here. We would love it more if we had an outside basketball court.
Why does SPA need funding? Spa needs this funding to help us and stay in shape. That statement goes right back to us needing an outside basketball court. This could really help us stay away from the drama and drugs. We would have two gyms to keep the kids that like inside gyms and volleyball inside. Think about it on a day where everyone wants to go to the gym and it gets way too hot, this happens all the time then we have students passing out on the floor. We could even use the money to build another gym period for the kids that like other sports we could start a new sport here. I like gymnastics and so does a few other kids but we do not have that here or cheer leading, but we really want it. This prize could really be our chance to make our home a better place for us.
We as students need an outdoor basketball gym to develop our stamina so when sports come we can participate in sport activities such as basketball, soccer, football, track, and baseball. These sports would keep us active and healthy. Plus when we join a team, it’ll be no problem running back and fourth. Conditioning takes a major part in sport activities, making sure you breathe properly and focusing on movements during games. Having a prize would be good for our school, having kids get involved in sports they like instead of football, and basketball. Well how are we going to participate in sport activities if we get lower GPA lower than a 2.0
Our contributions to these hopes that all ready been made is joining contests just like this one. We are writing these to show how we need things the other kids have. It would be helpful if we had a other basketball court for us. Taking our hope publicity to ask Jammer to get us a other basketball court. So people will stay study and pay attention. In class and the wont have much kick out.
Monday, November 8, 2010
Title your post, “SPA Theme Song.” Tie My hands"
The song Tie My hand go alone with SPA because when thire stuff going on some people think thire in war with everybody. If some people just dont get alone with people here some they try everything smach what was going on so they make it the bigger promble it is. So when it end up done somebody is all ready going to hurt them self. So them when it came around the staff there dose help in a way. They do help us with our schooling or help us to help us with living skull.
“SPA Theme Song.” Tie My Hands"
(Robin Thicke)
We are at war
With the universe falling whThis is
The sky is like when people are at war
and the only thing that can save us now And soen ther try to find out
is sensitivity and compassion what going on so then their mad at
But I know one thing's for sure the world.So that why it when thire need help they go and find what they need to stay happy at were their
I'm gonna get my kicks before it all burns down stay.
(Lil Wayne)
yeah, Some say tragedy is hard to get over
But some time that tragedy means its over, soulja
from the academy, league of rollers
I deny being down though they seem to hold us
my shoulders are strong, i prove them wrong
I ain't doing nothin but movin on, let the truth be known
But they talk that freedom matters, and didn't even leave a ladder, damn
(Robin Thicke)
I work at the corner store
We all got problems problems
Who was gon fight alone
No one's gon save us now
How you feel, you're not alone
We're all just jealous jealous
We don't reach the sky no more
We just can't overcome no
Chorus (Robin Thicke)
You tie my hands
What am I gonna be
What have I done so bad
What is my destiny
You tie my hands
What am I supposed to see
What have I done so bad
What am I gonna be
(Lil Wayne)
I, knock on the door, hope isn't home,
fates not around, the lucks all gone
don't ask me whats wrong, ask me whats right
and ima tell you whats life
and did you know?
I lost everything, but I ain't the only one
first came the hurricane, then the morning sun
Excuse me if I'm on one, and don't trip if i light one, i walk a tight one
They try to tell me keep my eyes open
my whole city under water, some people still floatin
and they wonder why black people still voting, cause your presidents still chokin
Take away the football team, the basketball team
now all we got is me to represent New Orleans, shit
[ From: http://www.metrolyrics.com/tie-my-hands-lyrics-robin-thicke.html ]
no governor, no help from the mayor
just a steady beatin heart, and a wish and a prayer
lets pray
(Robin Thicke)
These friends they come and go
but I got family family
These kids so fast they grow
They learn so quickly now
But there's no where to go,
but there's future future
Don't make this seem so low
And we can't overcome
Chorus
(Lil Wayne)
and if you come from under that water then theres fresh air
just breathe baby, gods got a blessing to spare
yes, i know the process has so much stress
but its the progress that feels the best
cause i came from the projects straight to success
and your next, so try they cant steal your pride its inside
then find it and keep on grinding
cause in every dark cloud theres a silver lining
I know...
yeah, yeah... yeah
see... Right now we just riding on love
And shine in the dark, we aint tryna do nothing be at the heart
We need love, that's all now
Chorus:
You tie my hands, what am i gonna be
What have i done so bad, what is my destiny
You tie my hands, what am I going to see
What have I done so bad, what am I gonna be
Born right here in the USA
But due to tragedy, looked on by the whole world as a refugee
So, accept my emotion, do not take it as an offensive gesture
It's just the epitome of my soul
And I must be me
We got spirit y'all
We go spirit
We got soul y'all
We got soul
They don't want us to see, But we already know
The song "Tie My Hands" go alone with SPA because when thire stuff going on some people think thire in war with everybody. If some people just dont get alone with people here some they try everything smach what was going on so they make it the bigger promble it is. So when it end up done somebody is all ready going to hurt them self. So them when it came around the staff there dose help in a way. They do help us with our schooling or help us to help us with living skill.
We are at war
With the universe falling whThis is
The sky is like when people are at war
and the only thing that can save us now And soen ther try to find out
is sensitivity and compassion what going on so then their mad at
But I know one thing's for sure the world.So that why it when thire need help they go and find what they need to stay happy at were their
I'm gonna get my kicks before it all burns down stay.
(Lil Wayne)
yeah, Some say tragedy is hard to get over
But some time that tragedy means its over, soulja
from the academy, league of rollers
I deny being down though they seem to hold us
my shoulders are strong, i prove them wrong
I ain't doing nothin but movin on, let the truth be known
But they talk that freedom matters, and didn't even leave a ladder, damn
(Robin Thicke)
I work at the corner store
We all got problems problems
Who was gon fight alone
No one's gon save us now
How you feel, you're not alone
We're all just jealous jealous
We don't reach the sky no more
We just can't overcome no
Chorus (Robin Thicke)
You tie my hands
What am I gonna be
What have I done so bad
What is my destiny
You tie my hands
What am I supposed to see
What have I done so bad
What am I gonna be
(Lil Wayne)
I, knock on the door, hope isn't home,
fates not around, the lucks all gone
don't ask me whats wrong, ask me whats right
and ima tell you whats life
and did you know?
I lost everything, but I ain't the only one
first came the hurricane, then the morning sun
Excuse me if I'm on one, and don't trip if i light one, i walk a tight one
They try to tell me keep my eyes open
my whole city under water, some people still floatin
and they wonder why black people still voting, cause your presidents still chokin
Take away the football team, the basketball team
now all we got is me to represent New Orleans, shit
[ From: http://www.metrolyrics.com/tie-my-hands-lyrics-robin-thicke.html ]
no governor, no help from the mayor
just a steady beatin heart, and a wish and a prayer
lets pray
(Robin Thicke)
These friends they come and go
but I got family family
These kids so fast they grow
They learn so quickly now
But there's no where to go,
but there's future future
Don't make this seem so low
And we can't overcome
Chorus
(Lil Wayne)
and if you come from under that water then theres fresh air
just breathe baby, gods got a blessing to spare
yes, i know the process has so much stress
but its the progress that feels the best
cause i came from the projects straight to success
and your next, so try they cant steal your pride its inside
then find it and keep on grinding
cause in every dark cloud theres a silver lining
I know...
yeah, yeah... yeah
see... Right now we just riding on love
And shine in the dark, we aint tryna do nothing be at the heart
We need love, that's all now
Chorus:
You tie my hands, what am i gonna be
What have i done so bad, what is my destiny
You tie my hands, what am I going to see
What have I done so bad, what am I gonna be
Born right here in the USA
But due to tragedy, looked on by the whole world as a refugee
So, accept my emotion, do not take it as an offensive gesture
It's just the epitome of my soul
And I must be me
We got spirit y'all
We go spirit
We got soul y'all
We got soul
They don't want us to see, But we already know
The song "Tie My Hands" go alone with SPA because when thire stuff going on some people think thire in war with everybody. If some people just dont get alone with people here some they try everything smach what was going on so they make it the bigger promble it is. So when it end up done somebody is all ready going to hurt them self. So them when it came around the staff there dose help in a way. They do help us with our schooling or help us to help us with living skill.
Friday, November 5, 2010
“The Sniper” Before or After Narrative
Well at the end the sniper had die because he could have made it because his arm was shoot had it had a open cut. So when he was in the war he had shoot somebody else but he did know intall in look at his face. But it was his bother so know he feel abd then he wish that he did want shoot at his bother.
Thursday, November 4, 2010
Internal and External Conflicts in the Story
In the story "The Sniper,” the sniper faces both external and internal conflicts. The internal confilict kill the other guy and he make the guy think that he is die and then he get away from the roof. At the end of the story he had thought that he had short the other guy he did it was his bother. But he did know because his bother was going for the other team.
Wednesday, November 3, 2010
"The Sniper" Fear
When facing heart-pounding fear, people perform well, because are they brave enough to put themselves in that position to help others. For example, during the terrorist attacks of 9-11, the people who were in the jet which got hijacked had to be brave enough to stand up for themselves. They also had to fight to save their lives. They also had to stay calm. All of these people, weren't expecting to go through the situation they went through, but they had to do whatever they could to save their lives.
Monday, November 1, 2010
Halloween Memory
Around 7:00 Clock Elena had to deal with a hole bench of drama. So then it was just all scary because are doing those for one dumb thing that I every hear. They are pretty stupid to do that. My Halloween was going good install so body had just jump somebody. Before that even happened I was watch the cool movie every. I was have the best time every then I had walk out side to go home and I hear somebody cry. Then He had call my name over there I went over there and he said go keep my bother so I did then everything went down every body had to go in side because were on lock down that was the board thing every. So my house meat we were having the best if we were some were else then in the house. Then my staff and made us cookie then we were watching movie then it came round it was the time to go hit the hay. Then I said even throw we did go did we did get to treat or tick we had fun at our house.
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