Thursday, June 2, 2011

Romeo and Juliet – Cause of Deaths

Do Romeo and Juliet die as a result of fate or a result of human errors?,”
Romeo had sent his brother out to see how his wife is doing because he not allowed to see her. And when he walk up to a hole bunch people and there was Julita there out of it. He had to go back and Tell Romeo that she had die but he dose know that she is out of it back a letter was exposed to get to him but the person was doing something that when he ride bye with his horse and did even know. So when he went to grave were his wife was put he had put up a rock and broken down the door. So when he found he walk up to her and start talking to her but he dose not know that she only out for 48 hour then she will be out of it. So then he kill his self because he could not had handle that he has lose his wife. So After 48 hours later she wake up with someone next to her but he telly her you got to get up and out of her there people coming but they don't know that she die yet. But when she was walk out and she say her husband on the floor and the person said that you have to go. But she say no and walk away from him but he said I got to get out of her. Then she sat down next to him and she pick up something where and try to make her self out of it again. But there was nothing in there so she pick up a knife and look at and said I will be dead with my husband and so she kill her self. Know they found both of them kill and know both of the family are together.

2 comments:

  1. Elena, have an adult or upperclassman revise your work before posting it. There are many errors that can be avoided if you get that extra help.

    Remember to also include evidence that will support your statement. By the way, why do you think they died--human error or was it fate?

    This paragraph if more of a summary of what happened in the last acts.

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  2. I now know what this story is about and I will be taking you up on your offer about helping me because I get confused a lot.

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