“Two Kinds” Character Analysis Paragraph

I feel like the story was all right, because she that little was not so rude to her mom. But he mom should have been rude to here kid because she want her kid to be right even though that person couldn’t hear he though she was doing a good job. But she was missing all the notes for the song and she keeping messing up but the teacher think she doing a great job. And I think that the mother she been a little softer on her kid.