Narrator Assessment Project - Thanksgiving 2011

Elena G.

Period 2
December 2, 2011
Narrator Assessment Project

Jammer Thank giving Dinner

First Person Narration from Elena’s Point of View

So last Monday night the kids from San Pasqual Academy Had came to the Hall of Champions and the San Diego Charger and the friends of San Pasqual had o together something for the student to have a dinner and do some activity. So when I first got ready I was in a rush because I didn't really want to go because I want to stay back and do my homework. But my friends say you should go and have fun. SO after all I went and and I was on the bus heading over there and when we pull put I bring back thoughts when I went to the Christmas one. That one was really fun. And so when it came to the time to get they had everybody sit down and they go bye table and so they when everybody go there food they had so special person that was talking about his pass and what he did for a living. And so after that everybody going to get a book about how and what he did to moved on from his bad pass. And so then the dance kids come one and everybody go happy then after when that was over everybody was talking and take picture with them and Finlay I was talking to someone I have see for the last night when I was over there.

Third Person Omniscient

When Elena woke up on Thursday and  was getting ready to go have thank giving at her family’s house. And when she was in the office and was waiting for her aunt to come and get her. And Elena txt her asking where she was and she tolled me that her car was getting fix and Elena was really down because Elena though she was going on pass. But Beth said if someone can during me back and so Elena  was like ok my sister can take me back . So when Elena got there she was really happy because Elena went to see my other family before Elena  had went to see my dad because Elena haven’t see them since She was 3.  When Elena  was with her dad it was very good but in a way it was hard because he left my mom when Elena was three and she didn't have a male person in my life. So When we went to my aunt house to eat Elena  was a little scared because my dad. what to meet my boyfriend and Elena didn’t think he was coming over but he came and when she got there Elena  walk in  the door and say him laughing. Elena see him bounding with my dad. And Elena  was happy because know she know that there nothing to worried about anymore.  Elena don't have to worried him say that if he going to provide him or if he going to like him. So yea my Thanksgiving is went really good . Narrator Expository Paragraph

A narrator can influence how much a reader believes the story. For example, in first-person narration we only get one person’s point of view and details. But in third-person limited/omniscient narration we know everything. We know the thoughts, the feelings, actions, history, past , present , and future of all characters. We also know about everybody in the story and what happens. The difference is that because they have a different point of view and tell the truth The third-person limited narrator/omniscient is more credible because they tell the truth and know what really happened. Many reader enjoy reading stories written using third-person omniscient narration because they are aware of everything that’s going on.