Friday, November 5, 2010

“The Sniper” Before or After Narrative

Well at the end the sniper had die because he could have made it because his arm was shoot had it had a open cut. So when he was in the war he had shoot somebody else but he did know intall in look at his face. But it was his bother so know he feel abd then he wish that he did want shoot at his bother.

1 comment:

  1. Elena, this seems more like summary/plot. The directions write a brief narrative (story) describing the events occurring before or after the events in the story.
    Please proofread and edit your work before posting it.

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